-What did you do well? 

I think that we had an understandable plot structure, which explored into both character's views and opinions throughout the act, therefore we had a pretty good understanding on who we were, and what we were supposed to do, the audience understood what we had to do and our intentions throughout the act.

-What did feedback did you receive? What do you need to improve? 

The direct feedback we got from ms. Kimi, was that there was no gamelot or jibberish, therefore we have to add language in order to dive into the separate characteristics and expressions of the character, hence we need more language and the performance was around 1.3 minutes, we need to add extra content in order to add to the scenes furthermore lengthening the performance. 

-What specific things will you do to improve before performance?

I will try to add more content, and climax to the story, and basically lengthen the performance, I would like to use language and sounds to characterize the different characters, and I would also like to make the performance a bit more 'vibrant' otherwise not repetitive but newer ideas every scene.

Peer Evaluation:

I will be assessing Arshad and Taseen's group...

-What did they do well? 

They had a variety of things going and we could understand who was which character.

-What feedback would you give them? 

Arshad's actions were a bit confusing since he was performing in an awkward manner which did not add to the character.

-What specific things could they do to improve before performance?

Use a bit more gramelot and maybe make your intentions and interactions a bit more clear?

The audience calling part was a nice addition though I did not understand what I had to do when I was up on stage with them.

Peer Evaluation

I will be assessing Ryan and Azman

-What did they do well? 

They had a variety of different interactions and the characters were understandable-What feedback would you give them? 

Call up some audience members and include them into the climax

Use gramelot

-What specific things could they do to improve before performance?

Gramelot

Audience interactions